Wow,nice! You put a lot of effort into this,you even drew the shells ejecting from the handguns! The only criticisms I have are the way you drew his mouth and the shadow,which are so minor they can be easily overlooked. One of the best colorless drawings I've seen.
"You're in a piece of fanart, Max." The truth was a burning green crack in my brain, a pencil drawing of me with two pistols in a dive similar to ones you see in the movies surrounded by a dull, green canvas. My name in capital letters lay under the picture by a "~spagi", displayed for millions in their own homes. An endless stream of people applauding the worker's drawing and expressing their love for the picture and a game lay in the comments section below.
I was in a piece of fanart, funny as hell, it was the most horrible thing I could think of.